Billions of e-mails are sent through Internet everyday. Internet marketers send millions of
e-mails everyday to potential customers, hoping to make a sale. However, how many customers bother
to read these e-mails let alone respond ?
While relevance of product offered, quality,
price etc. may play important role behind such customer apathy - more often, its quality of e-mail
that matters most. Great majority of marketing e-mails are not even opened - let alone be read or
responded to.
There may be many reasons why an e-mail goes unanswered, such as server
down, spam filter or recipient’s mailbox full - but mostly the reason lies in its format,
content and style. Chances of an e-mail eliciting any kind of response is indeed poor when recipient
thinks the e-mail as 'waste of time' or 'there's nothing more to write about'. Obvious destination
for such e-mails is the trash folder.
To be successful in e-business and saving your e-mails from trash
folder - its extremely important to understand what's acceptable in business e-mails in terms of
writing style, format and content.
You may have high quality product at competitive price
- but that may not be enough to reach buyers unless your communication style is as good. Your
communication must be able to attract recipient's attention through such acceptable style and
content.
1. Acceptable Format
A business e-mail must have a
business address as its sender. A mail from sales@rama-exports.com is far more effective and
acceptable than rama_exports@hotmail.com This is an extremely important requirement in any business
e-mail format for obvious reasons.
Here, we are discussing business not inviting friends
for birthday party ! If your business can not afford a business e-mail but offers million dollar
products - you really can not blame the recipient's cynicism. After all, you do not visit up-market
automobile showroom in shorts and slippers as sales people may not take you seriously.
In the anonymous world of Internet - establishing trust is the bedrock of any business
relationship. Anonymous e-mails do not convey a positive image about your company – and
possibly harms your cause.
Business e-mails come from web-sites at no extra cost. So, the
natural corollary of this point - to be successful in e-business, your business should have a
professional web-site.
Other important requirement of any business e-mail is a meaningful
signature line that contains your company name, address, tel, fax, internet home etc. All e-mail
clients (such as Netscape, Outlook etc.) offers facility for creating signature files that gets
attached to every outgoing mail.
2. Meaningful Subject Line
E-marketers often underestimate the value of subject in an e-mail.In a typical e-mail client - the
Inbox displays few items of informationsuch as date, from, subject etc. More often, decision of user
to read or send the e-mail to trash folder depends upon two pieces of information -From: and Subject
line.
That is why these two pieces are so important and need special attention.A
Business e-mail - as already discussed - help your mail to stand outover free mails. An attention
grabbing subject line does the rest Secondly, wording of your Subject line can be key in your emails
ability to get through spam filters. Write the wrong Subject line and spam filters will never let
your e-mail travel to Inbox !
So, what should you look for in writing a good Subject line ?
Firstly, personalize it as much as you can, such as adding recipient's name in subject line
(e.g. 'Kind Attn: Mr. John Hopkins, responding to your requirement for salted cookies', 'John, I
think you will find this very interesting')Such customization gives your email a personal feel and
tells the spam filters that you know the person you're writing to so it's much less likely to be
flagged as spam.
3. Acceptable Style
Politeness, readability
and easy comprehension are cornerstone of effective business communication. Politeness demands that
you first write about you and your business before requesting the same from your recipient. Avoid
words which may be construed as pushy, impolite or even rude such as ASAP, prompt,at your earliest
etc.
4. Readability
Readability demands that you write in
short sentences in direct conversational mode. Avoid using cumbersome sentences that so many
businessmen in Indian sub-continent are so fond of (perhaps colonial legacy). Examples of such
sentences - 'Would you be so kind of as to..', 'please find enclosed' etc.
Instead, use
direct conversation mode such as 'I have attached below copy of my last mail'. Never use
abbreviations such as "pls", BTW, "u" etc as you would normally do in a telex or telegram. Such
abbreviations and acronyms not only make your letter difficult to read but may even lead the
recipient to think you are lazy. You may be quite conversant with cryptic abbreviations and enjoy
SMS lingo - certainly not everyone!
5. Professional Style
Professional style demands that your mail is precise, to the point and free from spelling errors
and grammatical mistakes. Your content should run coherently from beginning to end, neatly organized
into paragraphs and ideally should not exceed 3-4 paragraphs. Instead of writing about your product
or company in details - touch important points and direct the reader to concerned sections in your
web-site through links
6. Persistence
Writing effective
e-mail is not sufficient unless you are prepared to follow them up. There may be many reasons why
the buyer has not responded and the best person to answer the question is - obviously, the buyer! So
go ahead, pick up the phone and politely enquire about your offer. You will be surprised to know the
reason - which may be as simple as the buyer not in town or the e-mail never reached him/her or as
complex as your negotiation style, product quality, pricing, payment terms etc. In any case, you
will get valuable feedback which can be used to sharpen your business process.
Conclusion - Why Communication is So Important in E-Commerce?
In the
anonymous world of Internet, often the only way your customer can evaluate you or your business is
your communication - your language, presentation and style. Your e-mail, web-site, presentation etc.
are your faces to the world - and these must inspire sufficient confidence in your buyer to transact
business with you or at least take you seriously. This is a marked difference from traditional
business and you should be aware of this feature of e-commerce.
You may be well known in
your own country but the overseas customer has no way of knowing how true your claims are. The only
touchstone he/she has is your communication - you must make sure they are really professional
looking. The professional visitors must immediately know from your offer that it has been written by
another professional.
So, take your communication style seriously and take professional
advice wherever necessary. Without good communication style - your e-commerce venture may not take
off the way you have planned.